by Erin Ramm
Once upon a time there was a sheep farm. All the sheep at the sheep farm were good looking, but the one named Fluffy McFluff-Fluff was the most handsome of all. However, he did not know he was so handsome, because all the other sheep were jealous and told him he was ugly. The sheep called him mean things, and one sheep said, "Hey! You look like a coconut!" They made Fluffy McFluff-Fluff very, very sad.
One day there was a hungry wolf out looking for something to eat. He went to the sheep farm, and saw all the sheep in the pen, and really wanted to eat Fluffy McFluff-Fluff because he was the most good-looking. So, the wolf called the sheep over, and said, "I love your poofy, fluffy wool. I love how it glistens in the sun! It looks so soft and fuzzy! Your wool is just so wonderful! I wish that you could come out of your pen so I can eat -- I mean , take a closer look and feel your silky, shiny wool."
Fluffy McFluff-Fluff was very, very happy that somebody liked his wool, so he walked out of the pen to show it off. But, the wolf attacked and ate Fluffy McFluff-Fluff.
THE END
""Foolish people are easily upset, but wise people pay no attention to hurtful words." Proverbs 12:16
Great fable, and awesome lesson! I love the verse at the end! Write some more!!!
ReplyDeleteYes! Awesome fable! Where ever did you come up with the name Fluffy Mcfluff Fluff? That name is sweeeeet! Keep writing!
ReplyDeleteWow! Your mom told me about your blog, and I am so glad I stopped to check it out. That's some amazing writing!
ReplyDeleteIt's sad that Fluffy McFluff-Fluff's story didn't have a happier ending - I myself would have loved to have him live at my house where I would have treated him very kindly! But how awesome it is that you can take God's Word and apply it so well. I'm very impressed with your maturity as a writer and as a person, and I'm very much looking forward to reading lots more of your stories in class this year!
Love,
Mrs. Campbell